[RE] Thank you for submitting your poems

Hi,

Nice to contact with you again.

For about a year  I've lost contact with your site,

but now it's possible.

I'd like to get your e-mai from now on

so, if you sent e-mail news to me,

I'd appreciate it.

Thanks so much, Mr.

 

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제목 : Thank you for submitting your poem
날짜 : Mon, 21 Mar 2005 11:57:15 -0500
보낸이 : "The Poets' Workshop" <info@poets.com>
받는이 : <imag1114@hanmail.net>

Dear Elliot,

Thank you for submitting your poem My Passion to poetry.com.

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this poem?

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that will help you improve your craft?

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Here's a copy of your poem so you can simply paste it into the Poets'
Workshop template.

My passion,
my passion,
my passion,
I cannot stand,
I cannot burn.

You are my forefathers and descendents.
You bear you and bear you and you,
becoming a floating fireball of soul
resounding against the dome of the sky
like endless refrains.

Your passion,
your passion,
your passion,
you cannot stand,
you cannot burn.

With the passion
what will you sow and reap in your life?
-modified(What-what)
[2002, in New Zealand]

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